Sunday, 9 August 2015

Griffin visits Room 5.

Ms Hodgson brought her dog into class this morning. He is a Griffin dog and his name is Griffin. We are learning to use similes to describe things. We wrote a description about Griffin. We worked in pairs doing Rally Coach where one person coaches and one writes. We wrote a line each and then swapped over.




Some of our best sentences were:

Griffin has a spongy nose that looks like burnt marshmallows - Summer and Casey
His moe hawk is like a wave - Tommy and Macey
Griffin is cute like a kitten. His ears are floppy and silky. - Anji and Aza.
He is soft and fluffy like a polar bear - Layla and Ollie.
He stands up and begs like a meer cat. 
Griffin is as silky as a blanket. He is hilarious and very stinky - Ernie and Mikayla
Griffins nose is like a little black puddle. -Lulu and Joseph
Griffins tail is curly like a squirrels. Hayley and Daniel.
His teeth are like a dragons. Sticking out and sharp - Keelan and Elayna.
Griffin is golden and white - Tanith and Dylan
His ears are smooth like silky material - Lulu and Joseph
He has googley eyes and a mustache around his black nose. - Sienna and Holly
His moe hawk sticks up like a hedgehogs spikes. - Keelan
He is stinky like a snail and as cute as a panda. His chest is round like a lions.- Lily and Blake. 
His eyes are like brown dirt. His noes is black like the night sky.-Rachel.
His eyes are googly as a goldfish. His teeth are as sharp as a knife - Lewis.

Wow, Ms Hodgson ca'nt wait to see what we write tomorrow.




1 comment:

  1. He's very cute. He looks like he is saying "Heyyyy" in that first picture!

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