Monday, 17 August 2015

Descriptions: Griffin.

We are learning to write descriptions. Here is Macey's description about Griffin.

The Wonderful Griffin
       
Griffin has eyes that are round like burnt cookies straight out of the oven. His nose is as spongy and soft as a cloud. His teeth are as sharp and shiny as a knife. Griffin’s moe-hawk sticks up like an eagle’s feather. Griffin’s body looks like an orange fluffy lion. His tail is like a roller coaster zooming around in circles.


2 comments:

  1. Great writing Macey. I can see Griffin in my mind. You painted a wonderful picture with your words.

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  2. Great writing Macey. I can see Griffin in my mind. You painted a wonderful picture with your words.

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